Improving Blog Comments

Today when koka Maria came in to do cybersmart, we had to improve one of our blog comments. To do this we had to look at the comments we had written to people, pick one that we thought was really good and by using the things that we came up with our buddies improve the wording and punctuation. I highlighted all the things that I changed red. This was a really good task and it helped us a lot so we were asked to make a post,  here is mine.